UFS 211 SEVENTH REFLECTION JOURNAL

Topic:

Plagiarism among College Students

Topic Sentence:

1.       Plagiarism means stealing or copying the work from original person and acknowledged it as his own work.
Articles or data from internet.

2.       Copy and paste

3.       Among College Students

4.       Assignment

Supporting Details:

1.       Students don’t know plagiarism is not one cyber crime.

a.       Don’t have knowledge about this crime

b.      No body told them plagiarism is crime but only say it wrong

c.       Parents, friends, teacher and lecture.

2.       There is no strict legal or the law not been done at College

a.       College law about plagiarism is to low and event the law not been strict

b.      Event its have, students and lecture see this plagiarism as lightly thing.

c.       Student have done the assignment, lecture just receive it.

3.       Students lazy

a.       College just for fun

b.      The date lecture give is so long

c.       last minute just do it

d.      copy and paste

Conclusion:

1.       Plagiarism is a crime that we also not really know about that.

2.       Lecture and society must thinks this issues is serious

3.       Make some campaign about these issues.

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Furthermore, more over and conclusion

Full Paragraph:

Plagiarism means stealing or copying the work from original person and acknowledged it as his own work and it’s a cyber crime. Articles or data from internet that we copy and paste is the one of plagiarism. Plagiarism can be seen among College Students when they do their assignment that have been given by theirs lectures. Plagiarism always students do because students even don’t know plagiarism is not one cyber crime. They don’t have knowledge about this crime even when they was high school, they low knowledge about this plagiarism. No body told them plagiarism is crime but only say it wrong. Example, parents, friends, teacher and lecture only say they can search the data from internet but they don’t say that copy and paste is a crime. Furthermore, college not really strict legal about this crime even they have, the law has not been done. This is because the college law about plagiarism is to low and event the law not been strict by the people in the college. Event the laws already have, but students and lecture see this plagiarism as lightly thing. Example, student just need to done the assignment and the lecture just receives it. Moreover, plagiarism become seriously because the students it’s self. They so lazy for doing they work. Even the lecture has given them a long date and time to do it. They just having a fun and not really care about they assignment and after a few days later, they just copy and paste the article or data from internet. Example, they do it for a last minutes work and they even don’t have a time to read it just copy and paste it. For the conclusion, Plagiarism is a crime that we also not really know about that. Lecture and society must think this issue is serious and not lets it a simple things. So we must make some campaign about these issues before it’s become so worse.

UFS 211 SIXTH REFLECTION JOURNAL

We often make mistakes when writing in English language. We have many ideas that we develop but we often make a wrong in the use of grammar. Example: Use grammar like past tense, present tense, and future tense. I also always confused using my grammar for writing a paragraph. Sometimes we also forget how to put the punctuation when we want to end our topic. or want to stop for a moment. Punctuation is important because when the reader read our articles or story. Punctuation can help the reader know the emotion on the story. Example; mad, cry, stop, shouting, silent and so on. We also always wrong in our paragraph by using Malay world or they way Malay world using they grammar. Malay grammar and English grammar are different and not always same. So we have to know if we are using English grammar or Malay grammar. Sometimes they are word that we cannot translate to English but still can use in our paragraph. Example: Nasi Lemak, Kulintangan, and so on. To make this mistake not always we do, we must read more English book even child story books or articles that can help us. We also need to make more exercise in grammar or paragraph.

UFS 211 FIFTH REFLECTION JOURNAL

Water pollution is the contamination of water bodies such as lakes, river, oceans and groundwater caused by human activities, which can be harmful to organisms and plants that live in these water bodies. It occurs when pollutants are discharged directly into water bodies without treating it first.

Although natural phenomena such as volcanoes, storms, earthquakes etc.

also cause major changes in water quality and the ecological status of water, these are not deemed to be pollution.

Water pollution has many causes and characteristics.

Increases in nutrient loading may lead to Eutrophication.

Organic wastes such as sewage and farm waste impose high oxygen demands on the receiving water leading to oxygen depletion with potentially severe impacts on the whole Eco-system.

Industries discharge a variety of pollutants in their waste water including heavy metals, organic toxins, oils, nutrients, and solids.

Power discharges can also have thermal effects, especially those from power stations, and these too reduce the available oxygen.

Silt-bearing runoff from many activities including construction sites, forestry and farms can inhibit the penetration of sunlight through the water column restricting photosynthesis and causing blanketing of the lake or river bed which in turns damages the ecology..

Topic:

Water Pollution

Topic Sentence:

Water pollution is the contamination of water bodies such as lakes, river, oceans and groundwater caused by human activities, which can be harmful to organisms and plants that live in these water bodies. It occurs when pollutants are discharged directly into water bodies without treating it first.

Supporting Details:

1. 1.       Organic wastes

a.       sewage and farm waste impose high oxygen

b.      receiving water leading to oxygen depletion 

c.       impacts on the whole Eco-system.

1. 2.       Industries discharge

a.       variety of pollutants in their wastewater

b.      heavy metals

c.       organic toxins

d.      oils

e.       nutrients

f.       solids.

1. .3.       Power discharges

a.       reduce the available oxygen

b.      especially those from power stations

Conclusion:

Silt-bearing runoff from many activities including construction sites, forestry and farms can inhibit the penetration of sunlight through the water column restricting photosynthesis and causing blanketing of the lake or river bed which in turns damages the ecology.